Seven Soldiers - The Extended Edition

I walked away from the story on Sunday night not really pleased with the climax, like I kinda skimmed through it, just to get it done.

So I thought about it a bit today, sat down after an early rehearsal, and tacked on another extra page or so... I'm not sitting at 50 1/2 pages, and a much better climax. Getting more emotion into it, getting more people involved beyond just shocked bystanders. I like it. It's good stuff.